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Tuesday, April 7, 2020
Ice Cream Surprise
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Hi Tayla, you used your imagination really well in your ice cream writing and the pic you found makes it look so delicious. What other desserts do you like? My favourite is anything caramel.
ReplyDeleteMrs Roach
Hi Mrs Roach
DeleteMy favourite dessert is anything with ice cream and chocolate.
Hi Talya
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I love the way you explained your new flavour and how you had to gather ingredients. Ice cream is one of my favourite foods. My favourite ice cream is goody gumdrops as it gives me both ice cream and lollies in the one bowl. What is your favourite flavour?
Hi Taylor,
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like a really good Ice cream. My favourite ice cream is Orange chocolate chip that makes my mouth water. Maybe at the end of your blog you could ask a question related to your blog.
Benjamin.